Captain Barnacle's Treasure Map
A crumbling treasure map leads two siblings on a wild chase across a mysterious island - but the real treasure isn't what they expected.
The map was inside a bottle, and the bottle was inside a rock pool, and the rock pool was at the end of Grandma's beach, down where the sand turned to shingle and the shingle turned to slippery green rocks that Grandma always said were an accident waiting to happen.
Kai found it on a Tuesday. He was poking around in the rock pools the way he always did when they stayed at Grandma's - lifting seaweed, bothering crabs, looking for anything interesting - when his foot knocked against something hard and smooth. A glass bottle, wedged between two rocks, half-buried in sand. It was dark green, the old-fashioned kind with a cork in the top, and something was rolled up inside it.
Kai pulled the cork out with his teeth, which Grandma would not have approved of. He shook the bottle, and a roll of paper slid out into his hand. The paper was yellow and soft with age, the edges crumbling, the ink faded to brown. It was a map. A real, actual treasure map, with dotted lines and arrows and little drawings of trees and cliffs and a lighthouse that looked exactly like the lighthouse at the end of Grandma's bay.
In one corner, someone had drawn a skull wearing a party hat. Underneath it, in careful handwriting: 'Captain Barnacle's Map of Most Excellent Treasure. Follow the Path. Trust the Compass. Dig Where X Marks the Spot.'
'X marks the spot,' Kai read aloud, his voice wobbling with excitement.
His sister Ava was sitting on a rock behind him, reading a book. She was ten - two years older than Kai - and she liked to pretend that she was too old for rock pools and treasure maps and getting excited about things. But when she looked over Kai's shoulder and saw the map, her eyes went wide and her book fell into the sand and she didn't pick it up.
'We're going to need supplies,' she said.
Fifteen minutes later, they were ready. Two ham sandwiches from Grandma's kitchen, wrapped in foil. A torch - the big rubber one from the cupboard under the stairs. A compass that Kai had found in a drawer, which spun freely and pointed in a different direction every time you looked at it, so was essentially useless. And Grandma's walking stick, which was sturdy oak with a brass handle shaped like a duck's head.
'Where are you two off to?' Grandma called from the kitchen window.
'Exploring!' said Ava.
'Stay on the path! Be back by tea!' said Grandma.
They were not going to stay on the path. The map was very clear about that.
The first landmark was the lighthouse. The map showed a dotted line running along the cliff path from the beach to the lighthouse, with a small arrow and the words: 'Past the lighthouse. Keep going. Don't stop even if your legs hurt.' Kai and Ava walked the cliff path, the sea crashing far below them, gulls wheeling overhead. The lighthouse stood at the end of the headland, white and tall, its light dark in the daytime.
The map said to go past the lighthouse and look for steps. Kai studied the drawing - tiny zigzag lines on the cliff face, leading down to a shape that might have been a cove. 'Steps carved into the rock,' he said. 'But there aren't any steps here. I've walked this path a hundred times.'
'Look harder,' said Ava.
They looked harder. Ava found them. They were hidden behind a gorse bush, twenty metres past the lighthouse - rough steps, cut into the cliff face, so old and weathered that they looked like natural rock. You would never notice them unless you were looking. Nobody had walked down them in a very long time; moss and lichen covered every surface, and small ferns grew from the cracks.
They climbed down carefully, one step at a time, holding onto the rock face. The steps were steep and narrow, and the drop to the sea on their left was enough to make Kai's stomach flip. But Ava went first, steady and sure, and Kai followed, clutching Grandma's walking stick.
The steps ended at a small cove. It was completely hidden from above - you couldn't see it from the cliff path, and you couldn't reach it from the main beach. The sand was darker here, almost black, and the air smelled of seaweed and something older - something earthy and metallic, like the inside of a cave. Which made sense, because at the back of the cove, half-hidden by a curtain of thick ivy, was a cave.
Ava pulled the ivy aside. Cold air breathed out from the darkness beyond, smelling of damp stone and the deep, mineral smell of underground places. She switched on the torch. The beam cut through the dark and lit up a tunnel - rough rock walls, a sandy floor, and a ceiling just high enough to walk under if you ducked.
'This is either amazing or terrifying,' said Ava.
'Both,' said Kai. 'Let's go.'
The map showed the route through the cave as a series of turns, drawn carefully in the same brown ink: left, right, right, left, straight on, then left again. Ava held the torch and the map. Kai held Grandma's walking stick out in front of him like a sword, ready to fight whatever might be waiting in the dark, which he hoped was nothing but which might be pirates or ghosts or both.
The tunnel branched. They took the left fork. It branched again. Right, then right. The air grew colder. Their footsteps echoed off the walls - a strange, hollow sound, like walking inside a drum. Water dripped from the ceiling and ran in thin streams along the floor. Kai could hear his own breathing, loud and fast.
'Are you scared?' Ava whispered.
'No,' said Kai. This was a lie, but it was the kind of lie that helps, so Ava let it pass.
One more turn - left - and the tunnel opened into a chamber.
It was smaller than Kai had imagined. In his head, treasure chambers were enormous, with vaulted ceilings and torchlight flickering on piles of gold. This one was about the size of Grandma's living room, with a low ceiling and walls that sparkled faintly where the torchlight caught crystals in the rock. But it was beautiful in its own way - still and quiet and secret, a room that the world had forgotten about.
A single crack in the ceiling let in a beam of sunlight. It fell at an angle, like a spotlight, and lit up the centre of the chamber. And there, in the centre of the beam, sat a wooden chest.
It was old. The wood was dark and swollen with damp, and the iron clasps were green with age. The lock had rusted away to nothing - the lid wasn't even properly shut, just resting on top, as if the chest was waiting to be opened.
Kai and Ava looked at each other. They looked at the chest. They looked at each other again.
'You found it,' said Ava. 'You open it.'
Kai knelt on the sandy floor. His hands were trembling. He put his fingers under the lid and lifted.
The hinges creaked. The lid swung back. Kai shone the torch inside. And what he saw was not gold coins. It was not jewels, or silver, or a pirate's cutlass, or a crown. What he saw was letters.
Dozens of letters, tied in bundles with string, written on cream paper in the same brown ink as the map. The bundles were stacked neatly, side by side, filling the chest almost to the top. And underneath the letters, wrapped in a piece of cloth that might once have been a handkerchief, were two things: a photograph and a compass.
The photograph was black and white, faded at the edges, curling with age. It showed two girls, about Kai and Ava's age, standing on a beach. They were grinning at the camera - huge, sunburnt, gap-toothed grins - with their arms around each other's shoulders. Behind them, unmistakeable, was Grandma's bay, with the lighthouse in the background. On the back, in pencil, someone had written: 'Margaret and Rose. Summer 1973.'
Margaret. That was Grandma's name.
'That's Grandma,' said Kai. He stared at the photograph - at the girl with the wild hair and the enormous grin, standing on the same beach where he had found the bottle that morning. 'And that must be Great-Aunt Rose.'
Ava picked up the compass. It was brass, small and heavy, with a glass face and a needle that - unlike Kai's useless one - pointed firmly and steadily north. Engraved on the back, in tiny letters: 'To my Captain Barnacle. Love, Rose.'
'Captain Barnacle,' Ava said slowly. 'That was Grandma. Grandma was Captain Barnacle.'
Kai picked up one of the letter bundles and carefully untied the string. The first letter was dated July 14, 1973. 'Dear Margaret,' it began. 'The treasure is buried. If you're reading this, someone found the map, which means the bottle survived, which means the ocean is more reliable than the post office. Here is what you need to know about this summer...'
The letter went on. And on. It was the story of two sisters - Margaret and Rose - who had spent a summer on this island when they were eight and ten years old. They had explored every cove, climbed every cliff, named every rock pool, and invented a pirate game so elaborate that it lasted the entire holiday. Captain Barnacle and First Mate Rosie. They had drawn a map, buried a treasure chest, and made a solemn pact: whoever comes back first, dig it up and read the letters.
But they had never come back. Rose moved to New Zealand. Grandma stayed on the island but somehow never climbed down those hidden steps again. Life got in the way, the way life does. Fifty years passed. The bottle stayed in its rock pool. The chest stayed in its cave. The letters waited.
Kai and Ava sat on the floor of the cave for a long time, reading letters by torchlight. They read about the summer of 1973 - the swimming, the campfires, the time Rose fell in a rock pool and pretended to be a mermaid for the rest of the day. They read about the pirate game, and the map, and the day they found the cave. They read about two sisters who loved each other so much that they buried their summer in a chest and trusted the sea to keep it safe.
Kai looked at Ava. Ava looked at Kai.
'Grandma is going to cry,' Ava said.
'Good cry or bad cry?'
'The best kind of cry.'
They packed the chest between them - one handle each - and carried it out of the cave, along the tunnel, up the steps, past the lighthouse, and down the cliff path to Grandma's house. It was heavy, and they had to stop twice to rest. The sun was getting low. The sandwiches were long gone.
Grandma was standing in the doorway when they arrived, about to call them in for tea. She saw the chest. She saw the state of them - sandy, sweaty, cobwebbed. She opened her mouth to ask what on earth they'd been doing.
Then she saw the photograph in Kai's hand.
She went very still. She took the photograph and held it close to her face, and her expression changed - from confusion to recognition to something Kai couldn't name, something old and deep and full of a whole summer's worth of love.
'You found it,' she whispered. 'You found Captain Barnacle's treasure.'
That evening, they sat on Grandma's porch with cups of cocoa - real cocoa, made with milk and sugar and a pinch of cinnamon, the way Grandma always made it. The chest sat open between them, the letters spread across the table, and the brass compass sitting on top of the photograph like a paperweight.
Grandma read the letters aloud, one by one, in a voice that shook sometimes and laughed sometimes and went very quiet sometimes. She read about the summer of 1973, and the pirate game, and two sisters who had been best friends in the way that only sisters can be. She read Rose's words - funny, warm, silly words, words written by a ten-year-old girl who didn't know she was writing something that would be found half a century later by her great-niece and great-nephew in a cave at the end of the world.
When she finished the last letter, Grandma was crying. The best kind of crying - the kind that comes with a smile so wide it doesn't fit on your face.
'I'm going to call Rose,' she said. 'Right now. Tonight. It's morning in New Zealand.' She looked at Kai and Ava with eyes that were red and shining. 'Thank you. Both of you. This is the best treasure anyone has ever found.'
Kai and Ava sat on the porch steps, drinking the last of their cocoa, listening to Grandma's voice drifting through the open window as she talked to Rose for the first time in years. They could hear laughter - Grandma's deep laugh and, tinny through the phone speaker, Rose's lighter one. Two sisters, separated by twelve thousand miles and fifty years, brought back together by a map in a bottle, a chest in a cave, and two children who had nothing better to do on a Tuesday afternoon than go looking for treasure.
The sun set over the bay. The lighthouse light came on, sweeping slowly across the water. Somewhere below the cliffs, hidden behind its curtain of ivy, the cave sat empty and quiet, waiting for the next adventure.
Kai looked at Ava. 'We should make our own treasure chest,' he said. 'And bury it. For someone to find in fifty years.'
Ava smiled. 'I'll draw the map,' she said. 'You write the letters.'
And that is exactly what they did.